I believe what you posted was actually very reasonable. But, what about this? what if you were to write a killer headline? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your website, however what if you added a post title that makes people desire more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little boring. You ought to look at Yahoo's home page and note how they create news titles to get viewers to click. You might add a video or a picture or two to get people excited about everything've written. In my opinion, it would make your posts a little bit more interesting.
