I think what you published was very logical. But, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not suggesting your content isn't good, however suppose you added a title to maybe grab a person's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda boring. You could peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they create news headlines to get people interested. You might add a related video or a pic or two to grab readers excited about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it might bring your posts a little bit more interesting.
